Zikura

Hero Name: Cardio-Beat
Hero Type: Sound Manipulator
Hero Classification: Evocationist Spellweaver
Description: Good for parties when your radio burns out! But seriously, this guy can make someone's head explode by manipulating sound waves into a form or shape and launching it at it's enemies... And more!

He would probably look most like a size 70 white infernal...

Main Attribute: Intelligence
Starting Str-16
Starting Agi-18
Starting Int-22
Str Per LVL - 2
Agi Per LVL - 2
Int Per LVL - 3

Skills-
If possible, but this is not needed- He starts out with this skill
Sound Beam: Cardio-Beat shoots a sound wave in the form of a beam of super-concentrated light at an enemy, dealing 50 damage and stunning the enemy for 3 seconds. Costs 75 mana with a cooldown of 6 seconds
(this looks like a white life-drain, or if you can't do that, just a life-drain beam)

Supersonic Sound Wave: Cardio-Beat launches a tidal wave-like...Wave at his enemies damaging and stunning all enemies in the way.
Lv1- MC/100 DMG/70 STUN/1 SEC COOLDOWN/9 SEC
Lv2- MC/150 DMG/130 STUN/2 SEC COOLDOWN/ 10 SEC
Lv3- MC/215 DMG/200 STUN/3 SEC COOLDOWN/11 SEC
Lv4- MC/250 DMG/240 STUN/ 4 SEC COOLDOWN/12 SEC
Lv5-MC/270 DMG/300 Stun/5 sec Cooldown/13 sec
Lv6-Mc/285 Dmg/350 Stun/6 sec Cooldown/14 sec
Lv7-Mc/300 Dmg/375 Stun/8 sec Cooldown/17 sec
(This skill looks like a white crushing wave, all levels do not change AoE or Distance, which is 250 and 500)

Banshee Howl: Cardio-Beat unleashes a horrible scream that gives anyone who hears it a penalty to their stats and damages them per second.(this works against alliies and enemies, so use it at the right time)
Lv1 - MC/125 DamP-5% ArmP-5% SpeedP-5% DmgPerSec-9
Lasts 6 seconds AoE-200 Cooldown/12 seconds
Lv2- MC/160 DamP-10% ArmP-10% SpeedP-10% DmgPerSec-15 Lasts 7 seconds AoE-300 Cooldown/15 seconds
Lv3 - MC/185 DamP-18% ArmP-18% SpeedP-18% DmgPerSec-22 Lasts 8 seconds AoE-350 Cooldown/17 seconds
Lv4-MC/200 DamP-25% ArmP-25% SpeedP-25% DmgPerSec-30 Lasts 10 seconds AoE-400 Cooldown/19 seconds
Lv5-MC/225 DamP-31% ArmP-31% SpeedP-31% DmgperSec-36 Lasts 11 seconds AoE-465 cooldown/21 seconds
Lv6-mc/240 DamP-39% ArmP-39% SpeedP-39% DmgPerSec-45 Lasts 13 seconds AoE-500 Cooldown/24 seconds
Lv7-mc/365 DamP-50% ArmP-50% SpeedP-50% DmgPerSec-60 Lasts 15 seconds Aoe-535 Cooldown/30 seconds
(Remember this affects alliies and enemies alike, when units are afflicted by this, it makes them look like they've been banished, kind of like having molecules torn apart with a 15% transparency)

Doom Song: Cardio-Beat Inflicts any unit with a sound wave, which goes inside the host body and damages it until it dies, once it dies, the sound wave is unleashes and all units within the AoE are damaged(Cannot be used on heroes...Duh...But it can be used on Cardio himself, which does 2x the damage the released sound wave does)
Lv1- MC/150 DmgPerSec-15 WaveDmg-100 AoE-200 Cooldown/25 seconds
Lv2- MC/175 DmgPerSec-30 WaveDmg-225 AoE-255 Cooldown/30 seconds
Lv3- MC/200 DmgPerSec-45 WaveDmg-350 AoE-300 cooldown/35 seconds
Lv4-MC/225 DmgPerSec-60 WaveDmg-425 Aoe-375 Cooldown 40 seconds
Lv5-Mc/250 DmgPerSec-75 WaveDmg-500 Aoe-450 Cooldown/45 seconds
Lv6-Mc/275 DmgPerSec-90 WaveDmg-575 Aoe-480 Cooldown 50 seconds
Lv7-Mc/300 Dmg Per Sec-105 WaveDmg-640 Aoe-550 Cooldown/55 seconds
(The afflicted unit looks like he's using mirror image all the time until he dies, the released sound wave looks like a warstomp. Also, because of him being able to use this on himself with the extra damage and the strategic advantage, he takes 2x longer to revive if he dies afflicted with this ability)

ULTIMATE: Sound Creeper: Cardio-Beat turns into a sound wave and goes underground, anything he digs under is damaged per second by whatever level damage it's set to...He is also spell immune while undergrounds.
Lv1-MC/200 DmgPerSec-125 AoE-250 Lasts 15 seconds Cooldown/100 seconds Armor Bonus/15 Hp Bonus/1000
1% chance to stun all enemies in aoe per sec for 1 sec
Lv2-MC/275 DmgPerSec-250 AoE-340 Lasts 30 Seconds Cooldown/160 seconds armor bonus/ 30 Hp Bonus/2000
4% chance to stun all units in aoe per sec for 2 sec
Lv3-MC/300 DmgPerSec-375 AoE-400 Lasts 45 Seconds
Cooldown/240 seconds armor bonus/45 Hp Bonus/3000
8% chance to stun all units in aoe per sec for 3 sec
(Yes, he can be attacked like this, but he is invisible. While in this form, he looks like a white crushing wave and the ground shakes around him with an impale effect which the enemy can see the impale effect, but nothing else unless they get a gem of true sight or something.)

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

LegendaryArcher

The Sound idea isn't that bad.
But you will have to finish the spells to level 7 because they increase in no particular pattern and hard to tell what they do at level 7.
Spell 1- at lvl 7, 9 sec stun seems kinda long.
Doom song seems kinda cheap as he can use it on himself before someone kills him and they won't get the gold plus he lets out twice the dmg.
Sound creeper is kinda weak later on because with 10 armor and 800 hp, 8 faierie dragons/some other night elf tech could kill him before he could do anything. Even melee units could take out 800 hp pretty fast. Or a spell caster i.e. Blood Mage could kill him.

<br />God, grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, the courage to change the things I could, and the wisdom to know the difference. -The Serenity Prayer<br />

ipwnn00bzors

He can buy items for that.
But I agree with LegendaryArcher.
Give him a little higher stats.

Overall it's a pretty cool hero.
I can't really think of how to make it better,
But it's not the best.
I'll reserve my vote for later.

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Zikura

How should I modify the stats? And of what?

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

Bloodmage

his ultimate would be hard to do..... think about mr. apples

ipwnn00bzors

Make his base stats (how many stats he starts out w/, as in str, ing, and agi) higher.
Also make how much more he gets higher.
I don't think that MrApples would have any problem with that.
I bet he could do much harder stuff.

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Zikura

Thanks, I got it now, lol.

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

Titan

There is one major, and i mean seriously major, problem with the hero. Its the models. There will not be any custom models in the map (nothing imported, as such it increases map size). I suggest you open up World Editor and scroll through the numerous models to find what you would like for the different buffs/effects and Unit models. You can do this by going to the object editor, units tab, select any unit, then double click the unit model choice. You can see the models from the main WE screen, in the middle left, where there is a small box.

rampagekid

could you add another skill to him which has a low cooldown as most of his have a good amount of cooldown time and it would be good to have a skill which can be spammed a bit. Even an aura would be good. Other than that the heros awesome.

Zikura

It's kinda gay that model files aren't used, I mean, it wouldn't take up that much space, and you'd know who has a laggy connection before you started the game...

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

ipwnn00bzors

Well I think that making imports takes too much time or something...

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Zikura

Fine, I chose a wc3 model that most suits this hero, but don't make me change, it took too long!!

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

yebeth1234

ok im running low on time here so i only managed to take a glance. but there was one serious issue for me. the stun spell that he has in the begining stuns for 2 sec and then had a 2 sec cooldown. stun, hit, stun, hit, stun, hit, rinse and repeat...does anyone else see major annoyance here? my recommendation would be to raise the damage a little bit, like to 50, and change cooldown to 4-5 seconds

Zikura

Um, I messed that up alittle bit. :P

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

yebeth1234

much better i just looked over the other spells. thye all seem good except for the ultimate. you do realize that 375 x 100 =37,500 right? thats quite a bit. with all the additional stat boosters this guy would become a death trap (think of the stun). all he would need are some skills that boost his speed and no hero would be able to escape him. to balance it out how about he loses a little movement speed and/or can't use his spells. and i have another question: would the impale effect include the tosing up in the air? if it did then this skill is definatly overpwered.

Zikura

I'll modify the ultimate to a shorter time period.
And no, he doesn't do impale, the effect if for other people to know he's coming, like in the game Tremors, so they would have a chance of running away before they got raped, but I will add a stun to the ultimate.

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

Zikura

If anyone thinks the stun should be removed, give me a good reason and I might remove it.

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

yebeth1234

lets put all stun skills together and see whether its too much:
1)stun 3 sec , 6 second cooldown
2) stun 8 sec, 17 sec cooldown
3) stun 3 sec, 8% chance every sec (100/8=12.5) so about 12 sec cooldown

start with 8 sec one, now have 9 secs more to wiat to use again, then the ultimate one, 6 secs for the first and 9 for the ultimate, then 3 for the nromal skill, leaving 3 for the first, 6 for the ultimate, and 3 for the other skill. now throw in a bolt staff and you have another 5 seconds (i think)... i think that if i did the math sorta right you have a limitless stun here.

leave out the stun in the ultimate i think or or if you really want it prevent sound guy from using any other spells.

Bloodmage

i liek this hero but i think it needs some work

Zikura

He can't use any other spells while using the ultimate.

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

Zikura

*Bump Diddily Ump*

Thank you Lord for giving me life, food, a home, clothing, and a half-loving family. But you still need to fix poverty, war, sickness, crime, violence, social status, racism, death, hell, goths, emos, stupid people, annoying people, gay people (except for hot lesbians on the net), man-eating animals, slugs, weapons, and the earth and all who inhabit it, including me.

luigi_fan64

lol hey just to let u no that skill is just like the 1 on that 1 website. lol did u get it from there?

im talkin about the ultimate

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IxDirxenxgreyxI

Cool hero, you get my vote.

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